Nice milly and Annabelle. I think I can relate to this story because I remember being nervous when I started at loburn school but I didn't have any bad dreams. You put a good amount of humour in it, I liked the mooing cow alarm clock.I think you could have added more paths after skip school like Get locked in house or think intruder is in house. I wasn't expecting it to be a dream I think that it was a good twist to the end.
Awesome Milly, good humour and very imaginative. Good description.
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DeleteGreat work Milly!!! Very entertaining! I liked how you describe Brock so well like saying how he where's a green t-shirt and has a Afro. Great job.
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DeleteNice milly and Annabelle. I think I can relate to this story because I remember being nervous when I started at loburn school but I didn't have any bad dreams. You put a good amount of humour in it, I liked the mooing cow alarm clock.I think you could have added more paths after skip school like Get locked in house or think intruder is in house. I wasn't expecting it to be a dream I think that it was a good twist to the end.
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